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Crime rates tend to be higher in cities than in smaller towns. Explain some possible reasons for this problem and suggest some solutions.

 

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In today’s world, some argue that​​ crime rates​​ have become​​ higher in​​ large-scale​​ cities,​​ while others claim that it is still​​ a problem affecting other towns.​​ Personally, I agree that​​ citizens​​ should be​​ careful if they chose living in urban areas.​​ In this essay, I will explore​​ reasons and solutions​​ before reaching a conclusion.

In today’s world, some argue that crime rates have become higher in​​ densely-populated​​ cities, while others claim that it is still a problem affecting other towns.​​ Personally, I agree that citizens should be careful if they choose living in urban areas. In this essay, I will explore reasons and solutions before reaching a conclusion.

The clearest reason​​ to​​ having​​ high crime rates​​ is that​​ there are​​ x​​ huge amount of jobless citizens, who​​ were​​ not able to find​​ proper​​ work places.​​ Additionally, we can​​ definitely say without question​​ that​​ existing​​ drugs in cities result in dangerous users’ behavior​​ while also​​ being​​ destroying​​ their health.​​ It is also often argued that​​ crime rates​​ can​​ represent​​ a low economic level.​​ In closing,​​ such​​ negative results​​ are usually​​ provided​​ with a high level of a government corruption.

The clearest reason​​ for​​ having high crime rates is that there are a huge amount of jobless citizens, who are not able to find suitable  work places. Additionally, we can definitely say without question that​​ drugs existing​​ in cities result in dangerous users’ behavior while also​​ destroying​​ their health. it is also often argued that crime rates can​​ evidence/prove/indicate​​ indicate​​ a low economic level. In closing, such negative results are usually​​ a symptom/result of​​  a high level of a government corruption.

Having said that, if​​ governments and economic regulations​​ don’t function​​ well,​​ all downsides​​ bring well-organized criminal groups and these​​ could be a serious issue​​ for​​ honest​​ commuters.​​ The main solution​​ might be that​​ municipalities​​ should not allow​​ a​​ crime growth at the beginning.​​ This means that​​ these rates​​ can​​ be prevented with video cameras on streets, well-structured police and by using modern drones.

Having said that, if governments and economic regulations don’t function​​ effectively, all downsides​​ open the door to​​ well-organized criminal groups and these could be​​ a serious issue. The main solution might be​​ for municipalities to forbid​​ the​​ crime growth at the beginning. This means that these rates can be prevented​​ with​​ video cameras on streets,​​ well-organised​​ police and​​ by using​​ modern drones.

If​​ municipalities​​ fail to​​ integrate new technologies reducing a high crime level,​​ then they risk​​ opening​​ the door to new waves of organized criminal syndicates.​​ As such, it is imperative that​​ governments continue fighting with criminals in big cities and smaller towns as well, protecting and defending their citizens.

If municipalities fail to integrate new technologies reducing a high crime level, then they risk opening the door to new waves of organized criminal syndicates. As such, it is imperative that governments continue fighting with criminals in big cities and smaller towns as well, protecting and defending their citizens.